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drcuriosity ([personal profile] drcuriosity) wrote2006-06-17 03:49 pm

Agnostic poetry

God is a Dancer - 2006/06/17:1540-1545

Someone said to me
That God is a dancer
That God is within:
Every flower, every child
Every ray of light, every dew drop
In Creation

I can see the beauty
Everywhere I look
Though the dancer eludes me
So If you see God
Please thank Him, for me,
For dancing with paint on his feet

[identity profile] dragon-spirit.livejournal.com 2006-06-17 03:55 am (UTC)(link)
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Did you write that? I like it very, very much.

[identity profile] witchcrft.livejournal.com 2006-06-17 03:02 pm (UTC)(link)
That very pretty!

[identity profile] almalkav.livejournal.com 2006-06-18 04:02 am (UTC)(link)
I like that. Good work.

[identity profile] isaacfreeman.livejournal.com 2006-06-18 04:53 am (UTC)(link)
Nicely done.

[identity profile] micheinnz.livejournal.com 2006-06-18 09:19 am (UTC)(link)
That is very, very good indeed. Mind if I link?

[identity profile] micheinnz.livejournal.com 2006-06-18 10:21 am (UTC)(link)
Done. Thank you.

[identity profile] princeskittykat.livejournal.com 2006-06-19 03:53 am (UTC)(link)
I do so like your way with words

[identity profile] cheesecat.livejournal.com 2006-06-19 09:51 am (UTC)(link)
rhythm is a dancer

[identity profile] kiwipixie.livejournal.com 2006-06-20 08:48 am (UTC)(link)
Warm fuzzies!

[identity profile] harmy.livejournal.com 2006-06-22 12:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful poem :) It conjures up lovely imagery, and I especially love the rhythm in the second verse.